Thoughts on First Chapter + Website

Just spent the last like 16 total hours on my computer making this website, was a ton of fun. What do you guys think of it, leave suggestions as to what else youd expect a comic website to have. I’ve seen other comic artists have a “characters” tab, doesnt seem like too bad of an idea. LET ME KNOW IF THERE IS ANY ISSUE WITH READING PLEASE. I really wanted to have a comment section for each chapter but Sqaurespace is pretty limited on that aspect. This will do for now. I’ll most likely just make a post for each chapter and link my posts at the end of the reading page. This is to prevent potential spoilers when more chapter come out.

Overall, you can let me know your thoughts on Chapter 1 Right here along with what was previously mentioned.